Bringing norms up in composing

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Bringing models up in composing Appleton Wiske Primary School Parent/Carer Information Evening Oct 09

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Improving composition Offering the kids methodologies that truly work. In what capacity would we be able to urge youngsters to compose when they have yet to discuss it? In our school, composing is weaker than perusing. This is the same both locally and broadly.

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Year gather structures 3 stages Foundation Stage (FS) Key stage 1 (KS1 matured 5-7 Yr 1 and 2) Key Stage 2 (KS2 matured 7-11 Yr 3,4,5 and 6) 3 classes Class 1 FS and Yr 1 Class 2 Yr 2,3 and 4 (KS1 and KS2 blended) Class 3 Yr 5 and 6)

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3 strands to Big Writing

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Daily fundamental abilities High recurrence Words from flow year assemble Phonics Handwriting Basic number aptitudes/times table/clock

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High recurrence words in FS

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Phoneme Wall

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Consonant Clusters

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Handwriting Class 1 (pre cursive) A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z a b c d e f g h i j k l m n o p q r s t u v w x y z Class 2/3 (cursive) A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z ªa ¶b ªc ªd â ó ªü ¶h ¶i ¶ý ¶„ ¶l ¶m ¶n ª‹ ¶p ªq ¶r ¢ ¶t ¶u ¶ú ¶þ ¶ˆ ¶þ z

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Basic number aptitudes Bonds to 10 - 20 - 100 Mental expansion and subtraction of progressively bigger numbers Doubling and splitting Times tables 2's, 5's and 10's 3's and 4's 8's, 9's, 6's and 7's

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Warm up exercises Word affiliation diversions (mother) Word families (words starting with..) Quickies ( family/amass names or alternate extremes) Crosswords and word seeks Whacky whispers ( what might X say to Y)

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4 Generic Targets Vocabulary Connectives Openers Punctuation

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Upleveling work How would you be able to enhance this work? The light was dim. I took a gander at the creature. VCOP Can you enhance this?

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Up leveling Look at your sentence. 1. Is it a basic sentence - for impact? In the event that it's not 2. Enhance it! Attempt some detail a descriptor/an intensifier a connective e.g. at the point when, while an expression/a statement 3. Shouldn't something be said about an alternate starting ? Not the typical I, He Try beginning with… a connective a period word e.g. Later, Soon… a provision e.g. Opening the entryway, I looked into 4. Check the strained. A dubious one is utilizing was/were with the –ing endings. We were sitting. NOT We were sat. 5. Have you utilized the BEST words ?

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Scoring objectives in composing Which parts of these bits of work have been uplevelled ? Consider VCOP. It was an enormous, green beast. It was a ... a....... Cyclops! The huge sharp teeth, the loathsome thunder, the green and dark scales, they made me feel awful. My heart was beating, beating so quick I couldn't relax.

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Prompts amid composing After 10 minutes, check accentuation After 20 minutes, urge kids to check for driven vocabulary After 30 minutes, urge the youngsters to check their openers and connectives utilized

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Short term targets Y4 We can join sentences utilizing and, in this way, however and in light of the fact that. We can utilize if, when, however keeping in mind to join sentences. We can shift the beginnings of sentences and once in a while begin with a connective. Y5 We can utilize if, when, however keeping in mind to join sentences. We can differ the beginnings of sentences and here and there begin with a connective. We can add provisos to make our sentences fascinating. Y6 We can differ the beginnings of sentences and now and then begin with a connective. We can add conditions to make our sentences fascinating. We can pick when to utilize basic and complex sentences for the best impact. YR We consider what we need to say. We thoroughly consider the sentence in our heads . We can compose a basic sentence. Y1 We thoroughly consider the sentence in our heads We can compose a basic sentence. We ensure our words are organized appropriately . Y2 We can compose a basic sentence. We ensure our words are organized appropriately. We can join sentences utilizing and, in this way, however and on the grounds that. Y3 We ensure our words are organized appropriately. We can join sentences utilizing and, along these lines, yet and on the grounds that . We can utilize if, when, however keeping in mind to join sentences .

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Activities to create vocabulary WOW Collect words. Could you consider how they can be utilized as a part of a sentence?

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Activities to create vocabulary The clergyman's feline. The clergyman's feline is a daring, aspiring and horrendous feline. Could you include any longer? The priest's feline is an overcome, brutal,............. feline.

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Activities to create vocabulary Parachuting WOW words The kid looked over the road. Can you uplevel this sentence by parachuting aggressive words into it? Do they all bode well?

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Using power openers Write down a sentence beginning with an "ing" word. Looking behind her,.. Singing uproariously in the auto, .. Stumbling off the pitch, ...

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Using power openers Write down a sentence beginning with a "ly" word . Warily, ... Neglectfully, .. Easily, ...

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Using power openers Adverbial expressions (way) With a gesture of his head, ... Skipping happily, .... Giving an enormous moan of relief,... Word intensifying expressions (time) After a couple of minutes, .. As speedy as a blaze, ... As the sun ascended in the sky, ... Could you consider 3 more?

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Using power openers Adverbial expressions (put) Above the mists, .. At the edge of the play area, .. In the shadowy clearing, .. Grouping words Meanwhile, .. Next, .. Before long, .. Can you consider 3 more?

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Encouraging connective utilize Connective cricket He was wiped out He dashed out Can you bat these sentences out by utilizing a connective?

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Encouraging connective utilize Get out of that! A pencil is stuck in your ear..... Can you escape that utilizing a connective?

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Encouraging connective utilize The "ly" amusement. sluggishly quickly aimlessly Can you interface these connectives into one sentence?

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The wrong answer ! Sluggishly, the lady extended on the couch, while her better half quickly cleaned the kids' toys away aimlessly.

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The right reply! Languidly, the man extended his hand for the remote control as he relaxed on the couch eating wine gums, while his significant other speedily cleaned away his garments, cooked the supper, cleaned the house, cut the grass, strolled the pooch and after that given way aimlessly into bed.

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Finish my sentence Can you finish this sentence? Martin contacted kick it into high gear his hand on the ball in spite of... This is a 3 minute test!

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Punctuation thoughts Kung fu accentuation diversion What sounds might you be able to use for every accentuation stamp? Could you 'Kung Fu' a bit of content?

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Punctuation thoughts Fruit serving of mixed greens circle amusement I require volunteers. I am going to say a sentence and our volunteers need to remain in the perfect place with the right accentuation image.

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Punctuation thoughts What's absent? Utilizing the pyramid, request that the youngsters take a gander at a line, inspire them to close their eyes and evacuate one accentuation stamp. Request that the youngsters open their eyes and work out what is absent.

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Punctuation thoughts Snap Please look under your seats. Some of you will have cards taped underneath them. In the event that you do, without saying a word, would you be able to discover your accomplice?

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Thank you We trust you have made the most of your night. Please now join the Friends of Appleton Wiske Primary School Annual General Meeting. Goodnight.

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